You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend’s belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited. In your letter include: - Why you are writing - What you’ve been doing since you last spoke together - Apologize for still having the items and ask how you can return them

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Dear Ankita, Hope you are doing well. I haven't seen you or heard from you for a

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. I am writing

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letter regarding the belongings which are still with me. The

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time we communicated was two years ago during winter. At that time you were struggling to find a new job. Hope you are well settled now.

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, I am married now and we have one kid who is very adorable, His name is Dinesh.

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, professionally I am well settled. I am extremely excited to share that I was promoted to Manager. Thanks for all the support which you provided me during my struggling period. During our college days when you were planning to relocate to another city to find a new job. I have a couple of

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which are still with me. So, I would like to apologize to you for keeping your thing with me for a long period of time. So, please let me know how should I return those belongings. Hope to hear from you soon. Best Regards Anand

kishna.238Mon Dec 11 2023

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coherence cohesion

The letter lacks a clear structure. It should start with appropriate greetings and end with a suitable closing. Ensure each paragraph presents a clear idea.

task achievement

The letter should directly address all points given in the task more explicitly. Make sure to explain why you’re writing, mention activities you’ve been up to, apologize clearly for keeping the items, and provide clear directions on returning them.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

177 words

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