People are migrating away from agricultural background to cities in search for work. What will be consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

There is an increasing
migration
from rural agricultural areas to cities in search for jobs.
As a result
, urban areas are becoming overcrowded and the social fabric of the villages
are
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is
under threat.
This
problem may be solved by improving infrastructure in villages and implementing agricultural reforms. Most villagers are engaged in
agriculture which
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agriculture, which
has over the years become less productive and profitable. The resulting urban
migration
has resulted in many deleterious consequences on the urban landscape. Major cities like Mumbai are overcrowded with slums and poor infrastructure
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plaguing
development.
On the other hand
,
agragarian
relating to rural matters
agrarian
and
village
communities no longer have the social cohesiveness as most members have become migrants.
For instance
, many men from my
village
are already gone
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have already gone
already go
to cities which has led to family discord and unhappiness among children. The problem can be addressed if factors are identified which are driving
this
movement of people. Poor employment and
education
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educational
facilities seems to be the prime motivation behind shifting to cities. If there is a larger investment in agriculture, which is the major occupation of
village
dwellers, the need for
migration
is expected to reduce.
Furthermore
, agricultural practices need to be modified to yield
better crop
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better crops
a better crop
and profit so that there is no need to travel
somewhere
at or in or to any place
anywhere
else. In fact, when
rural employment scheme
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the rural employment scheme
a rural employment scheme
was introduced in my
village
, many migrants returned back as they had a better life in
village
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the village
villages
a village
than in towns and cities. To conclude, growing
migration
from villages to cities is a major concern as it leads to concerns in both regions. Improving employment and educational facilities and encouraging modern agricultural methods can solve the issue to a certain extent.
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