Small shops in towns and villages are closing and replaced by big stores. Explain your opinion. Do you think it is good or bad?
Mega shopping malls have significantly acquired
large portion
of the market share from small retailers due to the fact that they were unable to compete with them and ultimately had shut down their businesses. I personally believe that it is a positive step toward transformation of old fashioned style of doing business to modern one for the reason that it provides comfortability to buyers along with allowing them to get goods much Suggestion
a large portion
more cheaper
than the smaller stores.
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cheaper
Firstly
, purchasers prefer buying their needed items from on big center
rather than visiting different small stores an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
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for
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of
types
of the needed products because all items are easily accessible and can be found at one place. Suggestion
type
In addition
, it provides them comforts, saves their time, and enable them to enjoy their moment while walking around those magnificently engineered malls. To illustrate, in 2016 it was reported by Forbes that Dubai Mall in Dubai city had allowed the residents to save almost 50% lesser time by buying them from there than outside small shops. It says that it is cause
efficiency in day to day life of the people.
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has caused
Moreover
, lets
consider the financial aspects of it, the fixed cost of the goods is directly correlated with the number of items sold by the suppliers due to economies of scale, Suggestion
let's
thus
as the numbers of items sold upturns, unit cost decline
which enables business to offer Suggestion
the unit cost decline
same goods
at Suggestion
the same goods
much lower price
. Suggestion
a much lower price
Likewise
, the large stores are in good position to take advantage the economies of scale because more people are willing to visit big malls due to different reasons. . For instance
, the success behind offering best offer in Kabul City center
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Center
centre
the small
retailers; it means that these places provide people an opportunity to save Suggestion
smaller
cost
.
In conclusion, emerge of enormous shopping Suggestion
costs
centers
hugely affected local business to an extent that an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
majority
of them are unable to survive and compete with them. In my view, it is a positive development for the society both financially and comfortably.Suggestion
the majority
a majority
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