It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects shouldn't worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that architects do not have to care about the beauty of whatever they build,
instead
they should only focus on achieving the task wanted from different buildings. While
this
saw
give an exhibition of to an interested audience
show
might be partly true, I believe that beauty is utterly important in everything in our lives. It may be a good idea for engineers to give their whole attention to finish a building in the right way in order to achieve its desirable goal, rather than creation of
breath-taking
tending to cause suspension of regular breathing
breathtaking
construction art.
That is
primarily because making a gorgeous structure definitely requires a huge amount of money.
Consequently
, it may become a load over the sponsoring organizations.
Moreover
, it can consume much time and destroy the time schedule planned for the project.
For example
, when a hospital is built, it is more significant to build proper cited rooms and halls
instead
of spending most of the money on various decorations.
However
, I would argue that beauty is tremendously important for every human being. Admittedly, human adores picturesque scenes and is attracted by gorgeous
staffs
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
stuffs
. To illustrate, many people subconsciously prefer to go to beautiful hospital if they can afford them.
Subsequently
, architects and owners should put
this
into consideration.
Furthermore
, making our
environment stunning
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environment, stunning
is good for our psychological health.
That is
why
environment organizations
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environment, organizations
stated visual pollution as one of the significant environmental problems. In conclusion, I opine that apart from focusing on the purpose why a building is constructed, it is
also
mandatory to care for making different surrounding buildings looking good.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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