Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on global scale while other believes it is better to deal with national level. Discuss both the views and state your opinion.

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The environment were never seen
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a declination as in the
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two decades. It is commonly thought by some people that an environmental issues need to be addressed and work on it in the form of a joint effort by several countries.
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, the majority of people think that it can be handled by separate country wise. In my opinion, it will be an optimal
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if we consider
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issue on a global platform in order to deal with it more precisely. The environmental problems
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as global warming, sound pollution, depleting rivers and natural water sources are some of the problems faced by the whole world. It is the time now, we need to act and find causes
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as CO2 emissions, rainfalls loss due to
deforestation
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etc., and work on appropriate resolutions which will solve these problems once for all. The global action with a joint venture of different nations will be more effective in terms of proper management and fundraising, which will be a primary need in order to solve all environmental difficulties.
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, the middle-east countries like Qatar, UAE and Saudi Arabia set their joint share in order to solve their
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problem with an invention of grass which can grow
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in
deserts even in scorching temperatures ranging from 45 to 52 degree Celsius.
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, issues
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as
deforestation
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, extinction of plants and animal species which are not recoverable can be well handled by the local government with full control. Some problems are associated with particular countries and there will be no connection with other nations.
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, in Madagascar
deforestation
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rate were hiked by 23%
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decade as per a report by the BBC news. They find an ultimate
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where teenagers applied their efforts to half actions against
deforestation
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with the support of local government authorities.
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the same continent, there are other nations
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as Middle-East countries they have their different environmental problems. In
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cases, it is better to act separately. To conclude, in my opinion, it will be best
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solution
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solved
by setting shared efforts by every country to handle the environmental problems globally to find an effective
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.
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, different countries have their own issues and significant changes can be applied to find a way to solve environmental difficulties.
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