Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Although

happiness

is not related to any

age but

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age, but

it has always been a prominent topic of argument that which period in human

life

cycle is better and

more happier

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happier

more happy

. I believe a person is

more happy

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happier

happiest

in his teenage when compared to adulthood and I will try to prove my views through

this

essay.

teenagers

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Teenagers

have more freedom in respect to choose or focus on their likings or disliking on any aspect of

life

, it may be related to studies, carrier, clothes or even irrelevant stuffs.

they

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They

are in their learning and blooming stage and

hence

can do more practical or experiments to bring out the true identity and to make futuristic goals which results in

happiness

Also they

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Also, they

have all the time to spend in a fruitful way

of me or myself

.e.

making

Suggestion

Making

new friends, enjoy quality time with family and togetherness, exploring better opportunities along with having fun.

Last

but not the least they are not overburdened with many responsibilities and

even are not supposed

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are not even supposed

to answer anyone.

only

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Only

the weaker side seems to be

lack

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a lack

of money which can be tackled with some preliminary jobs and be wisely handled without issues.

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the other hand adulthood comes with

lot

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a lot

lots

of responsibilities at the

first

state itself.

people

Suggestion

People

are often devoted to one or another thing as per their financial situations or conditions. Though adulthood comes with an advantage of

jobs

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the jobs

and established

carriers but

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carriers, but

that is

not enough to buy

happiness

. As mostly adults are under the burden of various kinds of loans may be education or house or family, which hinders the

happiness

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happier

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top of it today's world is full of stress and health related problems due to

kind

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the kind

a kind

of jobs people pursue which plays a vital role in impacting enjoyment and fun. Being dis-satisfied with their performances at jobs or at home and all the aggressive attitude worsen the fun and

happiness

life

larger extent

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a larger extent

. To conclude, as teenagers are full with more energy and positive

attitude

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attitude, hence

hence

that is

the best and happiest time in

life

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2Word repetition
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21Grammar mistakes
 

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

Formative years
Autonomy
Fulfillment
Wisdom
Significant choices
Exploration
Financial responsibilities
Deeper relationships
Personal growth
Accomplishments
Character development
Life milestones
Adulthood
Adolescence
Carefree nature
Achievements
Life satisfaction
Stress-free
Independence
Responsibilities

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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If we want to save the future of the planet, we will have to drastically change our way of life. What is your opinion?

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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