There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
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,
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,
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.
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purpose
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resembles
the Suggestion
resemble
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purpose it
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music
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International
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an International
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its
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