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The pie chart and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

The pie chart and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.
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The table shows the number of
fish
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 imported to the US in billions of
dollars
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while
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 the pie charts illustrate the sources of it in 1988, 1992, and 2000.
Overall
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, the total value of imported
fish
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 increased in those three years. Canada and China were two countries that always supplied
fish
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 to the US.
However
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, the percentage of
source
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the source
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 of
fish
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 imported from those countries
were
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 different from year to year. Canada’s export to the US
were
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 decreasing
while
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 China’s export
were
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 increasing. In 1988 there were only 6.57 billion
dollars
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 of
fish
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 imported to the US.
Then
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, the number slightly increased to 8.52 billion
dollars
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 in 1992 and to 10.72 billion
dollars
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 in 2000. Canada and China always exported
fish
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 to the US all over the year.
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,
fish
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 imported from Canada fell from 60% in 1988 to 28% in 2000
while
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fish
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 imported from China rose from 13% in 1988 to 30% in 2000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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