Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

The detrimental effects of environmental is quite grave not only at national level but to the whole
. Many awful problems persist in the global village. A lion’s share of society suggests, it is only possible at governmental level.
, I would disagree with
statement. Country and country make the whole
. And the whole
is facing global climatic change and environmental problems.
of all, we cannot deny that the role of the bureaucrats and social international organizations are prime here as compared to
individual citizen
the individual citizen
individual citizens
. The program events they conduct at large scale required large sums of money in order to combat with
, the foreign association and government bodies together can create a profound impact in maintaining the industrial area where pollutions are at extreme levels.
For instance
, a survey conducted by
environment suggested that the pollutions in certain geographic regions already surpassed 80% which is very detrimental and should be stopped.
, individual concern in order to fight back with
problem cannot be neglected. All individual know
problem quite well. If an individual can switch off the light when not in use, we can imagine
impact at
global level
the global level
a global level
In addition
, if people stopped using the plastic and other products which causes a lot of issues,
the company would have to produce the products
as eco-friendly. In a gist, governmental and international body would create profound impacts in combatting the
’s environment problems.
, individual concern cannot be neglected.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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