Some people say that you can learn more about another country by watching television programmes and films about it than by actually visiting it. How true is this statement? Is there anything you can learn about another country by visiting it that cannot learn by watching programmes and films about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.

As more shows and movies are now able to allow us to gain an insight into different cultures and customs, some might claim that we can understand more about the
world
outside simply by watching it on TV. While it might be true in some true in some cases, I believe that there
are
Suggestion
is
a range of unexplored corners of the Earth that could never be seen on any television programmes. From my viewpoint, I can understand why some people point to the view that television programmes and films is a vital source of information about another country. In today’s fast-growing
world
, the majority of nations and regions all want to introduce their various lifestyles and traditions to the whole
world
in order to develop the tourist industry and generate more revenue from it.
As a result
, hundreds of reality shows and documentaries about a specific community or region are broadcast on a regular basis, which hopefully catches the attention of as many international tourists as possible.
For instance
, I have learned about Carnival festivals which are celebrated annually in South
America
Suggestion
American
countries thanks to lots of televised programmes.
However
, I believe that no matter how many shows we watch on TV, there are many remote hidden parts of the
world
that human beings are still clueless about, ranging from the eastern peninsula of Russia to the
world
’s oldest desert Namib. Due to the harsh climate and uninhabitable environment,
such
places remain unaffected from the rest of the
world
, which means that an average viewer will never be able to know anything about those remote areas.
On the other hand
, avid travellers in these cases can obtain a better understanding of the far-flung destinations where they are going to explore or study. A family,
for example
, reported that they had become more knowledgeable and been able to live comfortably in nature thanks to their stay with an Amazon tribe. In conclusion, it seems to me that television can help us all to know about the wider
world but
Accept comma addition
world, but
there are still undiscovered secrets that haven’t been published on
this
important public service.
Submitted by minhhang29 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: