You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

Dear Shivansh, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you that I will be organizing a
party
at Juhu Hotel on 29 August
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2024 at 9PM. The occasion of hosting an event is quite special as I just got selected
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one of the top universities in Canada. To celebrate my success with friends and relatives my family decided to throw a
party
so that everyone could gather together. I know you will be coming directly after your work but the hotel that we booked is located in the outskirts of Mumbai so it might be difficult for you to reach there by your private vehicle as the routes are quite tricky.
However
, my suggestion is that you could park your vehicle at your work and
then
book an Uber directly to the Skyland venue and I will pick you
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that just an hour before the
party
. After the
party
, we have made all of the arrangements for you to stay at our guest house.
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of our friends are staying there but If you want to sleep without any disturbance
then
you are more welcome to stay at my house as well. I want to request you to take a leave for at least a week from your office so that we
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spend much of our time together. Hoping to see you soon. Warmest Regards, Saniya
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coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with a clear progression of ideas. However, make sure to review minor grammatical inaccuracies for an even smoother reading experience.
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The tone is very friendly and warm, which suits the purpose of inviting a friend to a personal event. Great job!
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are very appropriate and courteous, making your letter feel personal and engaging.
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You've comprehensively explained the reason for the party and provided clear directions, which effectively addresses the prompt.
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The letter maintains a friendly and inviting tone throughout.
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