The range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Others think it has an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give opinions.

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An argument that has been put forward is the notion that the effect of

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developing lead to the narrow between the rich people and poor people bigger. While, others have the opposite opinion of

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view.

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essay will explore both sides of

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issue and present a personal view on the matter. Moving on to the negative aspect of

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for different society layers in terms of income,

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all. Some of the

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can help people to earn more money. Rich ones have more advantages to get to know the

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than the other category of people.

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, some of the new

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are

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extremely expensive and

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, rich folks could be able to pay the exorbitant prices to use them. Most of the

destitutes

poor enough to need help from others

destitute

have no time and energy to pay attention to the new

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as they have to work for long hours to make up for their living expenses.

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leads to increase in the gap at the different economic layer on the society.

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, others take the view that the reduce the gap between the rich and poor people. Many new technologies make the world more convenient. People can be easy to get the information via

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, internet. People can search for all information which is they needed.

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internet

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the internet

provided a space for people

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having

to contact each other easier than before. Different types of social position have the same right on the internet. It makes the gap between the rich and poor people smaller. In conclusion, I agree with the

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argument because a range of new

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makes the world better and

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more convenient

. All of

people

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the people

in the society, does not matter if they are rich or poverty stricken, can get benefits from it.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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The range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Others think it has an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give opinions.

Fully explain your ideas

The best way to reduce poverty is to provide at least 6 years of free education for all children to learn to listen,read and count the number.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and government should stop spending large amount of money on their armed forces . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

To what extent has the internet made life more convinient? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.