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In many countries in the world,people buy clothes and choose hairstyles according to the latest fashion. Why is this happening ? is this a positive or negative development ?

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In the world today, people are becoming more fashion conscious and
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 is evident in their dressing and hairstyles. In my opinion
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people desire to look classy and fashionable in
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 to fit into the society and
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 has in turn led to so many illicit practices.
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people
dress
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dresses
 according to the fashion trend in
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 to appear rich and sophisticated. Some do
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 because of the nature of their jobs.
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celebrities
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actors
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actresses
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musicians and models) dress fashionably and
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 make the latest
haistyles
the arrangement of the hair (especially a woman's hair)
hairstyles
 with the latest makeup on their faces in
order
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 to look appealing to their viewers.Most of them wear clothes or carry a particular hairstyle in
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 to name it after them.
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, in the 1990*s a
particular
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particularly
 beautiful
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low cut hairstyle was named after a Romantic and Blues
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the religious society and most cultural groups condemn trendy fashion because of its negative impact
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especially on our youths and even marriages.A recent study has shown that many Nigerian universities enforced some draconian laws regarding indecent dressing in schools.
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 is
as a result
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 of girls wearing revealing clothes in
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 to be fashionable or attract the opposite sex
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thereby leading to rape. Boys prefer to wear singlets or T.
shirts
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Shirts
 with a crazy hairstyle.
some
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Some
 of them even colour their hair and
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 attracts cultists
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thereby luring them into armed robbery. Another point is that some married women feel jealous when they have friends whose husbands are rich and can afford sophisticated clothings and human hair weave-on for them.
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 makes them feel that their husbands are unable to provide for them and in most cases
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they commit
adultry
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adultery
 in
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 to meet up with
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 class.
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 can lead to divorce or
seperation
the state of lacking unity
separation
. In conclusion
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dressing fashionably is not bad
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provided one dresses decently and makes
resposible
worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible
 hairstyles that will not lead to illicit practices
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 as rape
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theft
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cultism and
adultry
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adultery
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