In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money to construct new railway lines for very fast movement between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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a keen interest

in what area authorities channel huge funds to.

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certain individuals opine that it should be used to construct

new railway

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a new railway transport system

new railway transport systems

the new railway transport system

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system for trains, which moves with great speed in between cities, others belong to the school of thought that it ought to be expended on overhauling existing public means of transportation.

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essay will discuss both viewpoints in order to arrive at a conclusion. On the one hand, it is reasoned that more revenue should be directed to building modern railway tracks because it is

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saving.

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, trains move with high level of speed, which shortens the

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passengers spend on the road.

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, there are no stopovers in between its

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destinations, but

only at major stations. A case in point is a 2015 survey conducted by the ministry of of

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in China, which discovered that trains can travel over a long distance at very short

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as compared to buses.

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, supporters of

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view have reason to claim that it should be given priority in terms of budget allocation by the government

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, others are of the opinion that old public

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be refurbished because it will decongest traffic.

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is due to the fact that, buses will be considered safe resulting in more private cars being taken off the road,

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people would take preference to commuting in them.

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, traffic bottleneck will decrease as roads are would be more accessible.

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America, for

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, have been reported to experience an increased number of its citizens travelling by public

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of its regular maintenance by the authorities.

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, it is for

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reason proponents of

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view base their argument. To sum up, while some argue that huge amount of money be spent erecting railway lines because it saves

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, others claim it should be used to refurbish public

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system that are in existence as it will take personal vehicles off the highway. I am of the opinion that none ought to be given preference over the other because they are both essential.