Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today many

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Today, many

of the countries, which are financially sound, welcome people from different developing countries seeking help. I strongly believe that these countries ought to stop

this

and, in that way,

the poor

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poorer

nations could survive on their own.

This

essay provides some reasons why the developed

nation

should ban people seeking refuge.

First

of all, the proper development of a country is hampered if people in the needy

nation

keep on seeking foreign aid. Many of the developing nations are in their status quo due to their utmost dependency on rich countries. In which, People in these nations spend their precious

time mostly

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time, mostly

preparing themselves to enter other countries and

this

leads to the scarcity of capable workforce in their home country

such

as many developing Asian and African countries and eventually they will not be able to contribute their talent for the development of their

nation

. Another reason behind the disagreement is that it helps the poor

nation

to become more independent and

this

help for their survival. The

nation

is forced to find the solution regarding their survival if there is not a slightest possibility of any support and most of the time

this

independency

freedom from control or influence of another or others

independence

has proven to be very prosperous for the

nation

.

For instance

, China between

late sixties

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the late sixties

and early seventies was very weak

economically but

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economically, but

they have been able to achieve success to overcome those perilous years because ironically they did not get any aid from other nations.

Therefore

, it can be sometimes better

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in

the realm if there is not any interference from any alien nations. In conclusion, if developed

nation

are allowed

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is allowed

to support their counterpart in

need

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need, then

then

I believe, it hampers the economic and financial growth of that country.

However

, developing ally could find the way to survive and even achieve growth economically and financially if there is no aid at all.