Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days the majority of governments are showing a lot of interest in developing the

country

economically.

while

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While

some people feel that governments should give equal importance to other factors too. I agree with the latter view. On the one hand, Governments these

days giving

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days, giving

more priority to economic growth.

This

is because, having an excellent

fiscal

involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit

physical

condition will help them to implement new schemes and programs that are useful for developing their nation —

for instance

, sanctioning the budget for building homes for poor, repairing roads, building dams etc.

In contrast

, if the government

don't show

Suggestion

doesn't show

interest in economic factors, it may fall in debts.

As a result

, it will improve the

country

's infrastructure in many fields.

On the other hand

, I would argue that there are many points to be considered along with economic factors

such

as literacy rate, poverty rate, and

health

the locus of feelings and intuitions

heart

rate. Since the majority of the government's income comes from the public only, it should give more weight to them.

For Example

, implementing schemes like free education, creating work for the

workless

ranking above all others

world-class

people, and free health to poverty-stricken people will be helpful.

Moreover

, it will change the lifestyle of people.

Also

, executing

these

denotes a person or thing

this

type of public welfare activities will improve the financial conditions of the

country

slowly and steadily. To sum up, Giving priority to only economic factors may increase the GDP of the

country

significantly while proffering equal importance with other factors like literacy, health, and poverty would rose the growth slightly and strongly.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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