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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #information #research #business #world
The issue of whether
information
should be shared all
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should be shared with all
 the time
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between
among
 studies and businesses or if people should keep it for themselves because it is too important have been widely debated. In
this
 essay I will discuss both sides and explain why I personally believe
that is
 a positive attitude when people
share
information
. On the one hand, there are some people who think that
information
 should not be shared all the time. The central reason is twofold,
firstly
 there are some kind of
information
that is
 too personal to
share
 with others.
Secondly
, if confidential
information
 is known by the wrong person, it will not result in a
good
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better
 way.
For example
, in a Brazil, many people use the same password in different devices
such
 as tablet
,
Accept space
,
 cell phone or computer. If a friend borrowed one of the devices and tells
to
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of
 another person the password,
this
information
 can be used against the owner.
Therefore
,
this
 kind of
information
 should never be shared in any situation.
On the other hand
, when it comes to research or business the
information
 must be shared.
In other words
, when the main idea is to help or improve a
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study case
 or a project
people
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person
 should add all
informatio n
a message received and understood
information
 they have available to them.
For instance
, many companies when start a new project do a “brainstorm” to gather as many different
information
 they can, in order to launch a new product or service.
As a result
, all individuals experiences and knowledge are important in that case.
That is
 way is relevant to
share
 as much
information
 as possible when people have the opportunity. In conclusion,
although
 some
information
 is personal and people should not
share
 with others, there are many other
information
 which contributes to the academic or business environment that must be shared.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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