Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #choices

It is argued that some folks think that there are many options to choose in life, currently. It depends on a person’s status, which can lead to many or less pathways.    There are many categories of things to choose from. It all depends upon what someone wants. Nowadays, from careers to personal lifestyles to technology related stuff, I agree there are many considerable things.

For example

; a doctor has many sub-specialities to choose from, compared to the past decade. If a doctor has completed 2 years in FCPS Medicine training, over here in Pakistan, he is

then

given a choice whether to become a General Physician/Internal Medicine Specialist or opt for

further

sub-specialities like Gastroenterology, Cardiology, Dermatology, etc. In the past decade

such

options wouldn’t have been available. To add to

this

, there are even super-specialities as well, after completing FCPS training in a particular subject. Say a person has completed training in FCPS Internal Medicine,

then

his super-speciality options would be Gastroenterology, Dermatology, Cardiology, etc.    There are limitations when it comes to choices, if someone is not competent enough, especially career wise. He

won’t

have much

fishes

Suggestion

fish

in his pond to catch.

For example

; an incompetent actor

won’t

be offered many movies,

thus

he would have limited scripts to select from. He

won’t

have many fans. He

won’t

be popular.

Hence

, it will tough for him to get what he wants, mainly due to less opportunities.    In conclusion, competence attracts too many options, but incompetence repels it.

Submitted by Sohrab Mushtaq on Sat Jul 13 2019

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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