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The table illustrates the
number
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 of native speakers of six languages as well as the
number
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 of speakers of these languages as an additional
language
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. It is noticeable that the
number
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 of speakers of Mandarin Chinese is strikingly higher than the other languages with over one billion speakers. People who speak Mandarin largely speak it as a
first
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language
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 (900
million
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). In comparison to
this
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 only 190
million
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 people speak Mandarin Chinese as an additional
language
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. What is remarkable about English speakers is that the
number
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 of speakers of English as an additional
language
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 is higher than that of native speakers of English (603 and 339
million
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 respectively). While the total
number
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 of Hindi speakers (490
million
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) is roughly equal to that of Spanish speakers (420
million
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); when it comes to speaking these languages as an additional
language
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 the
number
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for
Suggestion
in
 Hindi is much higher (120
million
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) than that for Spanish (70
million
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). Native speakers of Arabic and Portuguese are similar in
number
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with
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to
 206
million
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 and 203
million
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 respectively.
However
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, the
number
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 of Arabic speakers as an additional
language
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 (24
million
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) is almost 2.5 times higher than speakers of Portuguese as an additional
language
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.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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