Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.**To what extent do you agree with this statement?*

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medicine

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has been used for centuries

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and, seemingly

, it has been successful in treating certain diseases

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, some argue that

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medicine

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is ineffective, in some cases, even dangerous

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argument and I feel that

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medicine

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can be useful. Advocates of the idea that

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medicine

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is ineffective and

dangerous say that

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dangerous to say that

certain treatment plans and medications in

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medicine

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are not scientifically proven.

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, certain herbs and shrubs are consumed by pregnant mothers in some communities and these are thought to be immensely beneficial to the growing foetus. Now, science reveals that not only that these shrubs are

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ineffective, but

even dangerous to the growing baby. It is proven that it may cause foetal growth retardation.

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is just one example of an infinite number of instances where

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can be harmful.

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medicine

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has been widely used and has been proven to be successful in treating certain ailments and diseases.

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, people in some communities use turmeric powder on open cuts and wounds. A few decades ago,

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was thought to be unwise and foolish.

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, latest research clearly suggests that it is the best possible way to treat open cuts and wounds.

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seems to hold the cure for many terminal illnesses like cancer and aids. Large sums of money have been funded by various organisations and governments in the use of

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medicine

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in curing these terminal illnesses. In conclusion, I strongly believe that a combination of both modern and

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medicine

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is the best way to go forward in terms of treating various conditions given that adequate research has been done on

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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283 words

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