Many people today find it difficult to balance the demands of their work and personal life. What are the causes of this situation, and what can individuals and employers do to reduce the problem?

It is a fact that nowadays balance between job schedules and personal priorities is difficult to achieve. There are several reasons for
such
a situation and
also
few visible influences too. Both the aspects are explained in the ensuing paragraphs. Discussing the reasons, the most common one is
competetive
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
work
environment.
This
is because people are competing each other in
work place
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the work place
for promotion and
increments eventually
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increments, eventually
they would be spending more time in office to finish
work
and to get
recognizations
the state or quality of being recognized or acknowledged
recognitions
.
For instance
, one colleague recently received chairman award for his best contribution to the project
,
Accept space
,
he was actually working 12
hour
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hours
per day for the successful completion. The other cause is the automation effect in the industries. By
this
I mean that automation has taken all
repatitive
repetitive and persistent
repetitive
and manual tasks and sophisticated technical
work
would be pending for engineer's to take up
.
Accept space
.
To complete
this
task employee should do much research
ans
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
study it would take more personal time.
Furthermore
, cost cutting to increase the productivity is
also
one more cause to
this
problem. The mentioned causes can be solved by some methods. The foremost solution is to enable from employer side.
ie
Suggestion
IE
i.e.
,
employer
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the employer
has to allocate complexity based
work
assignments.
In other words
,
employer
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the employer
an employer
employers
should assign more task to complex task and vice versa, due to
this
employee can balance their
work
and personal life. The other solution is if the
work
pressure is more,
then
employee
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the employee
an employee
can switch the project or company
.
Accept space
.
This
is very effective and through
this
people
Suggestion
person
would get some relaxation time and they can plan their life
accordingly
.
For example
, my friend has switched 10 jobs in his 10 years
carrer
someone whose employment involves carrying something
carrier
career
carer
due to the
work
pressure.
Thus
, to conclude the
topic i
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topic, I
topic I
can
finally
commented that
althouh
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
worklife
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work life
balance is difficult to
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
due to the
work
commitments and other technical
challanges
take exception to
challenges
organizations and individuals should make sure to take
necassary
absolutely essential
necessary
steps to
balace
a state of equilibrium
balance
both
work
and
personel
concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality
personal
life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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