Nowadays, people of all ages from certain part of the world spend most time at home rather than going outdoors. Discuss the reasons, is this negative or positive development?

Recently, it is undeniable that many modern people spend their

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rather than outside. Some people hold onto

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gives disadvantages. Still, personally, I completely agree with the

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essay is going to establish the reasons behind the idea in detail. Mostly people are staying inside their

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because it provides them comfort and spend

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with the Internet media for enjoyment.

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, adults prefer to relax by watching TV after work for a long period, and children play on video games which are played on screen as well.

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, staying indoors are giving various points of the benefit. The

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reason to consider is that it is safe to stay in the

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. Take children,

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: it is very dangerous for children to spend

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outdoors, not only risking threats from robbers that increasing huge number in

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have opportunities to get unexpected accidents. If people spend more

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in the home, it can reduce their risk of unexpected dangers.

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, there are many more validities of spending

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inside the

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. The most important reason is that the current

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is contaminated with a lot of dust, which is not good for human health. The research conducted by Oxford University shows that 60% of the world have amount of dust in the

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air increasing

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rapidly, so being outdoors is very risky to receive the dust from

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pollution. In the final analysis, it likely seems to be understandable that spending in the

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many positive things like secure from unexpected accidents and not causing the body to get

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pollution. That means I am inclined to advocate that modern people should stay inside the

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rather than going outdoors.