Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their acheivements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People in the public eye are and will always be an inspiration for

youngers

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young

younger

.

However

, the current stardom of most of them

relys

have confidence or faith in

rely

on their glamour and

whealth

the state of being rich and affluent; having a plentiful supply of material goods and money

wealth

wheels

health

rather than on their talent. For

this

reason, it is argued that they represent a negative model to the new generations.

This

essay totally agree with

this

view. In the past, it

use

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used

to be crucial to be either talented or

percistent

never-ceasing

persistent

to reach fame. Because the spots available in the media were extremely

escarce

only a very short time before

scarce

, people had to work hardly and prove their value to deserve that space

among

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between

the stars.

For example

, only professionals

such

as actors, singers, politicians and

soccerplayers

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soccer players

which had an out-standing

carees

a motor vehicle with four wheels; usually propelled by an internal combustion engine

cars

careers

cares

were famous at that time.

As a result

, young people use to understand high performance as an asset to

acheive

to gain with effort

achieve

sucssess

an event that accomplishes its intended purpose

success

successes

sources

and eventually mirror it.

Nevertheless

,

this

scenary

an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)

scenario

scenery

has

dramactly

changed with the advance of technology. With the ubiquity of the internet and rapid development of social media, anyone who exposes themselves on these platforms can become famous nowadays due to their popularity expressed trough likes and comments. Usually, these people become wealthy only by promoting business and brands to their audience.

Thus

, many young people are more interested in growing their

instagrans

than learning a profession. To conclude, I agree that the current way to

acheive

to gain with effort

achieve

fame is a

nocive

someone who has entered a religious order but has not taken final vows

novice

model to young generations and threats the

evolvement

the act of sharing in the activities of a group

involvement

of society as well.