When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The traditional skills and lifestyles will disappear
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of the
development
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of the
technology
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so according
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so, according
to some, it is unnecessary to try and keep them alive. In my opinion, I disagree that the
development
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of
technology
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will lead to vanishing our traditions,
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, it will greatly help our conventional skills and traditional ways of
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to thrive.
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of all, the history of civilization is the history of
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: from the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel to the
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of the internet. Some technologies,
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as weapons of mass destruction, are of negative impact on people’s
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life
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live
. Others,
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as medical advances, positively help people to live better and longer and very much will help traditional ways of
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. The
technology
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is not responsible for vanishing the traditional
life
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of a certain kind of community, but the generation of a country is only responsible for the keeping of the conventional skills and the traditional lifestyles to be alive;
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as own custom, and traditional dishes. If people feel eager to save their tradition, there is no power on earth can destroy it even the
development
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of the
technology
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.
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, the advances in
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can positively contribute to preserving the conventional ways of
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and skills for certain people to be
flourish
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flourishing
and alive.
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, the internet is considered a token of the
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of
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nowadays; it helps people from all around the world to know the traditional custom of any country on earth.
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, the Ministry of Information and
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in Egypt succeeded to promote culture and Egyptian lifestyles by using the internet and mobile television.
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act will result in increasing the number of tourists every year and it will bring greater rewards to society as a whole. In conclusion, the
development
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of
technology
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is considered the best way to promote and keep traditional skills and conventional lifestyles alive.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancement
  • Efficiency
  • Global connectivity
  • Cultural identity
  • Diversity
  • Innovation
  • Coexist
  • Sustainable
  • Eco-friendly
  • Energy-intensive
  • Practical skills
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Homogenize
  • Preservation
  • Global diversity
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