You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir, I am John, I am currently

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persuing

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my final year in

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science department which is lead by you. I hope you do remember me from

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time, we

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the work-related seminar

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to take part in

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which is on

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Intelligence, as

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is my primary interest of research.

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might not only add some value to my CV but

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give insight for future courses in our department. It might be a great start for me and thank you for insisting

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information regarding the seminar date, accommodation along with the estimated cost. I need to come up with a schedule and

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ahead of time. It will help reduce the cost if I book things in advance. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, John

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