Research suggests that majority of criminals who are sent to prison would commit crimes when set free. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve the problem?

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Researchers are of the view that many inmates will
reoffend
money returned to a payer
refund
after their
release
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from
prison
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.
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arises due to the negative influence of other prisoners and the
lack
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of vocational skills.
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essay will propose two promising solutions to
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problem. Perhaps the most important reason for
reoffending
money returned to a payer
refunding
of criminals is the effects of corrupting influences while they were behind bars. Prisons house different types of criminal and many are often
allow
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allowed
to
interract
act together or towards others or with others
interact
interacted
interest
with each other.
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, some hardened criminals can easily influence others to commit
crime
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after their
release
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. They may link them up with their associates outside
bar
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the bar
who will reintroduce the released criminals to crimes.
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, the surge in drug associated crimes in Nigeria
have been attributed
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has been attributed
to introductions of inmates to drugs while in
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.
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,
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criminals easily return to
crime
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. Another key factor is the
lack
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of vocational skills by inmates. Most of them
lack
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the education, experience or skills needed for employment.
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, they often find it challenging to be gainfully employed and commit crimes again after completing their terms in prisons. Fortunately,
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, there are two promising solutions to
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problem.
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, prisoners should be separated in prisons based on the type of
crime
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they commit.
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, young and
first
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time offenders should not be mixed with hardened criminal while in
prison
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so as to reduce the chances of
been
the state or fact of existing
being
introduced back to
crime
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.
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, prisons should be a rehabilitation
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
where lawbreakers are educated and trained to develop useful skills that would make them employable after their
release
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from prisons. As a consequence, they would be able to earn a livelihood after
prison
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. In conclusions, some criminals commit
crime
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after their
release
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from bars owing to the negative influences they are exposed to while in
prison
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and due to the
lack
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of skills. The separation of
innates
one of several resident of a dwelling (especially someone confined to a prison or hospital)
inmates
based on their crimes and the training of criminals would help reduce cases of lawbreakers
commiting
perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
crise
utter a sudden loud cry
cries
series
cruise
after
been
the state or fact of existing
being
released from prisons.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rehabilitation programs
  • Reintegration into society
  • Recidivism
  • Barriers to employment
  • Social stigma
  • Mental health issues
  • Peer influence
  • Inadequate post-release support
  • Counseling
  • Community programs
  • Substance abuse
  • Relapse into addiction
  • Support systems
  • Financial aid
  • Incarceration
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