Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea.Some people think they should be banned.Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, usage of plastic bags has been increased to
large extent
Suggestion
a large extent
. There are many
controvercial
marked by or capable of arousing controversy
controversial
controversies
statements about them.
Let's
make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen
Lets
discuss in detail regarding the same in the following part. Regarding the advantages of their usage.
Firstly
, There are majorly useful, when we have unplanned shopping.
For
example
, We have time for unplanned shopping,
then
these come
to
Suggestion
in
handy to carry our shopping
laguage
.
Secondly
, They are easily
purchage
obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
purchased
and to carry.
For instance
,
amount
Suggestion
the amount
of
purchage
obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
purchase
is less than the other available items.
Third
, Easy to manufacture regarding the quantity. For a sample, it requires ten percent of time to produce them in
comparision
the act of examining resemblances
comparison
with other available resources. Coming to the disadvantages, They are
hazzard
Suggestion
a hazard
hazard
hazardous
hazards
to
environment
Suggestion
the environment
in different ways.
Intially
Suggestion
Initially
, Recycling of them is not an easier process.
For
example
, Cloth bags can be recycled and made as new bags, but not the case with these.
Next
, They are not decomposed, when left in open area.
For
example
, In dust bins, neither they are decomposed nor they
allows
Suggestion
allow
the contents in it. Another, Harmful to the animals, when they consumed it.
For
example
, the left over bags, are consumed by them,
then
the chances of these creatures can lose
life
Suggestion
a life
. In conclusion, To my opinion, while considering all the cases,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
felt to ban them
instead
using them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • detrimental
  • non-biodegradable
  • pollution
  • biodegradable
  • sustainable
  • mitigate
  • ecosystem
  • recycling
  • reusable
  • environmental impact
  • eco-friendly
  • implementation
  • convenient alternatives
  • enforcement
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