Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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As per the recent survey was done by the ‘University of Ireland ‘, 63% of the people enjoyed more of their teenage years. But some people believe that adulthood brings joy and

pleasure even

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pleasure, even

after having responsibilities. The essay will discuss both the viewpoints. On the one hand, the life of teenagers is without responsibilities. They enjoy without worrying about the future as they live in the moment.

Additionally

, youngsters have many friends, and they do for outing or picnics with them.

For example

, if the friends randomly plan to go for trekking

then

without any

second

thought, a teenage would decide to join them. He/she may take permission from parents and go with friends.

On the other hand

, adults are more mature and organised. They like to take control of their life as they make their own decisions.

Furthermore

, they are earning for themselves and their family.

For instance

, a person buying a gift for his mother with his salary gets a feeling of satisfaction.

However

, in my opinion, both the age groups have their own happy moments. To elaborate, there are many heartbreak issues with teenagers.

This

makes them feel that they should grow-up soon and be mature enough to handle

such

situations.

Similarly

, an adult, after working rigorously for the whole day, misses the time when he could leave everything and enjoy a carefree life. In conclusion, happiest times can not be decided by age group, but it depends on the perception of a person. A person can be happy in his teenage years and even enjoy his adulthood.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

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Formative years
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Exploration
Financial responsibilities
Deeper relationships
Personal growth
Accomplishments
Character development
Life milestones
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Adolescence
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Achievements
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