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Space Travel Has Made Little Difference To People’s Lives

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 some people think that
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 research does not provide much value because it has not been able to find life on any other planet, in my opinion, it has benefitted humans in many ways. A major contribution of
space
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 travel is the exploration of the universe. In ancient times, people were not aware of the common facts related to our
earth
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 and other planets. Even the shape of the
earth
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 was not confirmed and
space
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 travellers made it possible by clicking photographs
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 the
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. The search operations conducted by the researchers contributed to greater understanding of the galaxies in the
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.
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, these findings helped us to study the geographical features of our planet, which are important to determine the weather conditions or predict natural disasters. Heavenly bodies
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 as asteroids or comets often collide with one another and
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 their pieces may fall on
earth
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 causing destruction. With the help of
space
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research we
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research, we
 can detect
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 threats in advance and take measures to protect our
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. Not only
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, some beliefs in supernatural powers have
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 been eradicated from the minds of people as they can comprehend the universe with facts, figures and photographs.
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 to
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,
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 travel is an intriguing area of science and attracts many youngsters to join
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 field. Because there is too much to explore, coming generations can have better career prospects in
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 sector. In conclusion, I firmly believe that
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 travel made so many contributions and in future there are possibilities of finding life on other planets.

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