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Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree

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The communication of messages through social networking sites is fast and it is having a convincing impact on the youth. Many companies are using
this
 mode to promote their goods and to fascinate customers.I partially agree with the fact that social media persuade a user shopping for new articles, but some part of the old generation is reluctant in buying products being publicized online.
This
 essay will discuss both the views of different types of users. Social media sites convince people in many ways. The
First
 and the foremost, the method used is recurring promotions. The multinational companies put their banners on every networking site, and the online posters are shown again and again whenever we are accessing these platforms.
Such
 strategies encourage youngsters to try those items once.
For instance
, while browsing through Facebook.
com
a rotating disk shaped to convert circular into linear motion
Cam
Com
 and YouTube videos, we come across many advertising videos after every two to five Minutes, which makes us
,
Accept space
,
browse through the merchandiser website and check out their catalogues.
Moreover
, the main target audience of the sales team is youth and they are very keen to follow new trends and wants to be always updated.
Such
 approaches are used by various organizations to make an individual buy a certain good.
On the other hand
, elder persons don't adapt to any new change easily;
thus
, most of them prefer to buy things from their long-known shopkeeper
instead
 of buying an online marketed product. To recapitulate, social media marketing sites manipulate folks to a much greater extent in the context of buying goods. In my point of view, everyone should buy a product which is relevant to his requirement rather than being influenced by sites;
however
, older people should
also
 use the advertisements to update themselves with the latest technology and competitive prices.
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