Some people believe famous people’s support for international aid organizations draw public attention. Others think celebrities reduce the importance of the problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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, "Bedah Rumah", is one of the television programs in my country searching for poor Linking Words
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who suffered from Aceh's Tsunami disaster in 2009. It gets a lot of attention with his participation and helps the victim recover well from the disaster. But, after a long time, I am aware that many Use synonyms
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it may be forgotten if not being maintained as well. I believe we should not care about Linking Words
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