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Nowadays culture is much the same all around the world when compared to previous times. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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People identify themselves with various aspects like
culture
, language, history and others. These days, every part of the globe has almost the same
culture
 which was not the case in the past.
Although
 it is a constructive phenomenon, I believe that it is undesirable because of the reasons explained in the essay. One major advantage of following same
culture
 worldwide is that equality prevails. In
the older
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the old
 times, people were discriminated based on dressing style, caste, religion, nationality and creed whereas now with the same
culture
 these distinctions are slowly diminishing and
therefore
,
this
 change should be welcomed.
For example
, in the 1950’s when the Indians went to Australia for colleges, they were treated disrespectfully because of their traditional clothes, but at the present time, almost all students around the world wears jeans and
t-shirt
a close-fitting pullover shirt
T-shirt
shirt
 for universities and there is no way to make fun of anyone based on their attire.
Hence
,
an
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a
 uniformity is observed with the similar
culture
.
On the other hand
, if the same
culture
 gains popularity, the indigenous individual traditions will be lost. The young people of today
wishes
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wish
 to have wedding parties in churches like the western countries which mean that they are gradually discontinuing their own rich customs with great meanings and
consequently
, these customs disappear from the face of the earth over time.
For instance
, Hindu weddings are usually composed of
series
Suggestion
a series
 of steps that makes a pact with the natural forces of the world for the well being of the couple.
This
 is now largely abandoned because it is not the style followed in the rest of the nations.
Thus
, the customs will be destroyed when the current trend continues. In Conclusion, despite of the fact that inequality will not
exists
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exist
 with single
culture
, I am of opinion that the local customs will die out which have significant meaning for its practice.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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