During the last century, the use of cars has increased dramatically. This has caused problems such as pollution and overcrowded roads. Why do people buy cars and what can we do to stop people from buying them?

Car

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The car

has been considered a symbol of wealth. The usage of cars

has risen

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rose

significantly over the

last

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hundred

years which

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years, which

has resulted in issues

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as traffic jams and dirtiness.

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essay will discuss the reasons of buying vehicles and necessary measures to hold people from purchasing them. Most people like to commute in their own

automobiles because

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automobiles, because

the transport system is not up to the mark. It’s easier to travel on their own, at their preferred

time

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,

instead

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of waiting for a long

time

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for a bus or a train.

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, travelling in a public transportation can

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be difficult and cumbersome, especially during the rush hours.

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, you can hardly find a place to sit in New York City’s subway during working hours.

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, people prefer to get their own mode of

convince

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convincing

to save

time

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and

increase

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comfort level.

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, certain steps need to be taken to decrease the pollution and jams caused by the

increase

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in the numbers of cars.

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, decreasing the public transport charges and providing a better service can shift people towards

it

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its

usage.

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, increasing the tax on the cars, which is considered a luxury, will make them more expensive and hard for the people to purchase them. To illustrate, almost 1.5 million citizens travel by the subway system in Japan. In conclusion, pollution and road congestion has increased in the

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century because of

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increase

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an increase

in the use of automobiles.

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essay discussed the main reasons people opt to buy cars, including saving

time

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and more comfort. It

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suggested the solutions to stop individuals from buying them, which are twofold: upgrading the public transport service and

increase

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prices.