the number of people are at risk at serious health problem is only because of overweight. what is the reason and how it can be solved?

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An increasing number of people are facing various health related problems due to obesity problem.
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is because of unhealthy eating habits and
adaption
the act of accepting with approval; favorable reception
adoption
of
sedentary lifestyle
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a sedentary lifestyle
,
however
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,
this
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problem can be lowered by some efforts taken by the government by spreading awareness of the healthy lifestyle and individuals by involving themselves into physical activities. One of the main reasons as to public facing overweight issues is their consumption of unhealthy
food
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. With the establishment of multiple fast-
food
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chains, people prefer to buy outside
food
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as it is
cheap
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the cheapest
and available at every place.
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, many young people often eat burgers or pizza at McDonalds and dominos.
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, people are not performing any exercises or playing sports these days due to their busy living and adapting sedentary lifestyle,
subsequently
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, in weight gain. To put it simply, working people choose to watch television once they are back at home.
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, most people face
threating
interact in a certain way
treating
threatening
problems
such
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as cardiac or
diabetes which
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diabetes, which
is harmful and may even
led
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lead
to
dead
the event of dying or departure from life
death
.
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, obese people can control
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dreadful
events
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event
by involving themselves in eating
more health
Suggestion
healthier
more healthy
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food namely
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food, namely
home cooked
food
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and salads.
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, taking some efforts in doing some exercise, sports or any physical activities which can help them reduce their weight. Not only
this
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, government can
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play a significant role in eradicating
this
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epidemic by promoting the benefits of living a healthy life and spreading awareness of risk involved in being overweight and obesity problems through their campaigns.
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, higher tax should be imposed on fast-fast restaurants. By doing
this
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,
food
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of
such
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restaurants will be sold at higher price eventually
less consumption
Suggestion
less consumed
by the people. In conclusion,
obesity problem
Suggestion
the obesity problem
is leading people to increasing health problems leading to
threating
create by training and teaching
train
thrashing
to their life,
however
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, it can be controlled by eating healthy
food
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, involvement in physical exercises and the government promoting and spreading awareness
by
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of
their campaign.
Also
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, imposing higher tax to the fast-
food
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chains as people will buy less
food
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outside and cook frequently at home.

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