More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Among the various changes we are encountering daily between the previous and recent times, is the new mindset that prefers to have offsprings in an older age.
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shall have some pros and
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cons, but
are these merits enough to take
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decision or not? In the past, women, whether
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educated, they
have been or not, were accustomed to getting married at her early 20s ages and directly have a baby on her bare hands just after
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year of
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. Since the life at
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moments have been much easier, cheaper with less needs,
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,
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would only aim to send his child to a considerate school. To put it in another
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, no luxurious requirements, unlike nowadays, as participating in a well-known club for different trainings and exercises or going out for
costy
entailing great loss or sacrifice
costly
trips frequently. Meanwhile, no much concentration was given to the
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of raising children properly, but just in a similar method that
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young mother has been brought up even if it was a false
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of raising.
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, at the recent moments, people are paying more attention to
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issue regarding
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and children. Should they be able to offer a relatively high standard of living to their children or not has become a serious concern that mostly yields to postponing the intention of having children just after
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.
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, having a man in a relationship but never take a forward step until his savings reach
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thousand
,
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to up to 7 years. Despite being more immersed in work and practical life, youth are now frowning of taking a huge responsibility as
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and bringing up children. Whilst these may not be positive reasons, a
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crucial aspect is the delicate focus on how children are raised in order to supply them with proper mentality and spirit. For
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specific purpose, I would greatly argue that the benefits of having children in older years
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exceed
its drawbacks. In conclusion, to have children and bring them up properly is not
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an easy matter
, so the society is tending,
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the past, to do so at the most suitable age, which happens to be an older
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. Many reasons for
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way
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of thinking including mainly getting stable humans, for that in my view point, I think the strengths of
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decision overcomes its weaknesses.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • delaying parenthood
  • financial stability
  • career advancement
  • personal goals
  • higher education
  • fertility treatments
  • relationship stability
  • health care improvements
  • personal development
  • postponing children
  • achieve milestones
  • family planning
  • modern society
  • life expectancy
  • paternal and maternal age
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