Working is taking a more important role in people's lives. Why are people working so much? Do you think this trend is good or bad?

In modern times, people are spending their majority of

time

in working in order to obtain wealth.

Therefore

, people strive for working unremittingly no matter the result is

benefit

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beneficial

or not. In

this

essay, I will offer the underlying

reason

for working unremitting and give the opinion why

this

trend could be negative to people. The primary

reason

for people tend to work so much is that one is

strive

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striving

for possessing

the high

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the highest

quality of lives. With earning more wealth, people can treat themselves better.

For instance

, employees can move closer to companies, so they can

reduce reduce the

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reduce the

commuting

time

.

Also

, parents

persue

carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in

pursue

peruse

person

to earn more money in order to give their children

well

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good

education. People

also

have more opportunities to go

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

due to the better

wealth

a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease

health

condition.

Thus

, almost everyone in the world

endeavor

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endeavours

endeavour

to work so hard even it is a heavy burden for them. To my way of thinking,

this

brings negative consequences in the aspect of health issue. Once people over-worked,

this

means that their body cannot afford the excessive working load. As

time

goes by, their body may

beaffected

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be affected

by some diseases.

However

, these diseases may not diagnose in the short term, but diseases are already harmed to bodies slowly. Reducing the leisure

time

with families is another

reason

why I consider working too much is a vicious trend. The

reason

lies in people who spend their major

time

on working is easier to

alienated

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alienate

from their families. Once family relationship is ignored, it is difficult to repair. In conclusion,

although

seeking for higher quality of lives is

positive

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positively

to individual and the whole society, people still need to concern more about potential health problems and

time

distribution simultaneously.