There are many extinct animal species in the world. Some people think we should protect animals from dying out, while others believe we should spend more time on problems of human beings. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

These days, the increase in human

population

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has created

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is creating

a burden for major and small cities. While some people argue that to solve

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problem

countryside

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should be opened up to create more housing for

people but

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people, but

on the contrary

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some believe that

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countryside

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the countryside

should be preserved. I believe

countryside

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should not be changed to accumulate more people because the consequence will affect the entire world.

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, I think that expanding cities to the

countryside

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will cause irreversible damage to

nature

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.If more people move to the

countryside

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, a lot of green vegetation would need to be cleared to support their housing structure, new electricity grids, water

pipe lines

gossip spread by spoken communication

pipelines

and many more. Rather than exploiting the green cover, we could consider

creating

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creating a population

population

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control measure.

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, China started with the world's

first

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one child policy to combat exponential

population

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growth.

This

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not only would reduce stress on

over crowded

cause to crowd together too much

overcrowded

cities in the

future but

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future, but

will

also

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help to keep

nature

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intact.

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,

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countryside

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the countryside

is

main source

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the main source

a main source

of agriculture produce and dairy. Putting pressure on

countryside

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by reducing the amount of open area can cause tremendous pressure to provide food.

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, if the production level of the farmers goes down, it can cause an inflation of basic food prices. So rather than solving a problem, we would end up creating more issues for the whole

population

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.

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, we should stop damaging the

nature

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for short term gains and look towards alternatives to provide long term solutions. I believe

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is the only way to coexist with

nature

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.