Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

One of the most topical issues in modern society is the increasing number of criminals.

That is

because it is often said that criminal activity cannot remove from the world. I totally disagree with

this

view and in

this

essay, I will provide enough arguments to support my perspective. Generally speaking, there is a wide range of advantages, why people believe that longer imprisonment is really necessary to lessen the crime rates. Perhaps the main reason why people in favour of

this

trend is, that it will act as a warning by law that any antisocial and offence acts are intolerable and unacceptable.

For instance

, life imprisonment and capital punishment are pre-planned for murders and horrible assault eases.

This

will make people think several times before committing to a crime.

In addition

, longer prison will assure the community that bestiality will receive the highest degree of punishments and never be roamed in the public freely which will make the community free from offence. As a consequence, it ensures the less threat to the local from these anti-social elements.

For example

, a recent survey conducted in Dhaka, and it's clearly shown that awarding a longer judgment of 16 years for sexual assault, lead to decrease the sexual harassment cases. Crime is a consequence of the circumstance. Nobody is born a criminal. Society needs to observe deeply into the situation which gives rise the criminals and should try to block it.

For instance

, substandard is the main reason for a person to commit an offence. So, if the government ensures the basic needs of a person like a standard health care, housing and tertiary education, et Cetra of its' citizens, the incidents of robbery or any worsened antisocial activity will be decreased dramatically. In conclusion,

this

is a topic which raises some questions in contemporary life. Having considered both sides of the viewpoints I would argue that putting death sentences will make our society free from extreme offences.

However

, if we don't put the death penalty on violent crimes, people will engage in themselves with the world of crime.

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Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

More and more people are shifting to a plant-based diet. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Environmental problems are too big for individual countries or individual people to address. In other words,we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traffic congestion is a growing problem in many of the world's major cities. Explain some possible reasons of this problem and suggest some solutions.

The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum

Charities and organizations always give special names to particular days such as 'National Children's Day' and 'National Non-smoking Day'. What are the causes of these particular days? How effective are they?