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Courses and general online study have recently become very popular. However, some people still prefer to attend classes in person. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The online study programs are increasingly becoming popular among the people nowadays.
However
, some still prefer the traditional way of learning rather than following the online courses. In my view, I believe there are a great many benefits of the internet based learning.
To begin
 with,
one
 of the primary arguments of those who like conventional method is the authenticity of the online materials. Because there are many links available for a particular subject stream, it is always hard to decide which
one
 is the best or which
one
 contains the real information regarding their area of study.
Moreover
, there are certain advantages in the teacher based
education
 system.
First
 and foremost, each student can get individual attention from the instructor and
this
 will result in student identifying their weak areas and eventually end up improving those areas. Another benefit is the chance of asking questions in
this
 environment that will really help to clear-out any doubts in pupils mind.
However
, modern online study methods able to address most of
this
 pressing matters and have characteristics that are specific it itself.
For example
, a person can learn anything they would like irrespective of his or her physical location. Due to the rapid growth of telecommunication sector, now we can access the internet anywhere using our phones and laptops.
Hence
,
one
 can follow lessons anywhere it prefers to, it may be on the bus, train.
This
 particular advantage of online
education
 helps us to spend our precious time efficiently.
Furthermore
, in recent time, they have introduced the concept of the webinar, which is same as the traditional way of
education
. There is an instructor and students.
Also
,
this
 would be live and the only difference is the physical location between the teacher and the followers. In conclusion,
although
, classroom based traditional
education
 ways has certain aspects that it make most preferred among some people, recent development in telecommunication field has helped to catch up to those by introducing concepts
such
 as webinars and it has helped students to save their valuable time.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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