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An international language would remove one of the main differences which separates people of different nationalities and this would lead to greater international understanding and co-operation. There should be one international language which everyone agrees to learn and speak. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#language #differences #people #nationalities #co-operation
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Currently there are hundred numbers of different languages existing
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world
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. Only very few common languages are used for international
communication
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. A common
language
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 is important to maintain the
communication
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 with foreign people. An international common
language
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 is essential to communicate with different people those are in different
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Geo
 location. We are moving into a digital
world
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, where we need to visit different country for different purposes like study, business and conference. Once anybody move to different country he/she needs to communicate in a commonly accepted
language
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. He/she needs to hire someone who can translate his
communication
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 if he is not able to communicate in international languages.
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 will incur extra cost and increase the
communication
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 gap. Once people will start communicating in a common
language
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, there will be less cultural difference among the people, which will give a common platform for all people to live in
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world
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. It will make people's life easy and comfortable to do study, business and other services those they wish to do get from different countries. Without knowing the international
language
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 people will not be able to get benefit from foreign
countrys
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
country
counties
. All
world
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 leaders as well as local government should come to an agreed point regarding an international
language
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. For long run there will be a tremendous improvement
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in
 international trading, hospital, education and other core services which will give us healthy and peaceful life. There will be some cost and infrastructure investment to achieve
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 goal that can be minimized with proper planning. Awareness
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 more important among people learn a common international
language
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. The promotion of common
language
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's advantages can be an inspirational factor for people to learn an international
language
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. In summary, I strongly believe that there should be one common
language
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 in the
world
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 for our future betterment. There is no alternative way to stay relevant and improve any country without an international
language
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.
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