Some people think that plastic shopping bags should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
In these days, governments try to apply some policies like limiting some things which are harmful to
environment
Suggestion
the environment
and
plastic
shopping bags are one of them as well. There is a debate among people over whether
this
policy is right or wrong for society use.
However
, I strongly support
this
action for several reasons.
However
, I confess people who do not agree with the
banning say
Accept comma addition
banning, say
that the
plastic
shopping bags are more convenient and useable, but I strongly believe that they are so dangerous for
environment
Suggestion
the environment
. Because the
plastic
containers are not biodegradable and recyclable. So these factors make them difficult to reuse and decay in a landfill. They can stay even more than hundreds of years in the
environment
.
Therefore
, the environmentally friendly policies,
such
as banning the
plastic
bags should be applied in order to save our planet clean.
Moreover
, the eco-friendly policies like
this
one reduce the cost of goods and it is quite beneficial for the
government
economy.
Although
people who support the idea of banning
plastic
bags are not
right
Suggestion
rightly
say that
this
kind of bags has reuse advantage, it is known that the
government
has to spend more and more expenses in order to make these
plastic
containers. So if they will have banned, it can help not only to the
environment
, but
also
government
budget. To sum up,
although
some people disagree with the limitations on
plastic
shopping bags because of their easy use, I strongly believe that
this
kind of containers
harm
Suggestion
harms
the
environment
and they are costly for the
government
.
Submitted by ayshanaliyeva1998 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: