Your local library wants to improve its services and facilities. Write a letter to the library. In your letter you should: explain who you are make your suggestions and explain how this would make the library better.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to provide some suggestions to improve the

library

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emenities

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amenities

. My name is Pramod. I am a university student, and I have been using

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library

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the library

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on Front

st.

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for two years. As a regular user, I would like to give some ideas about improving the facilities.

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apply

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internet

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the internet

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is accessible

through out

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the

library

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, it would be great if the speed of the

internet

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is high. I need to do assignments for the university

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and use

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library

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a library

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computer system to do research and note down the details.

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due to

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lack

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the lack

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number

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a number

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of computer

system

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systems

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, I have to

unitlize

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utilize

my personal system which is not as

powerfull

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powerful

library

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PCs. By installing

high speed

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high-speed

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internet

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, users can access information faster which makes

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apply

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internet

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surfing faster

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time saving

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time-saving

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, if a few more computers are installed

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it will not only reduce the waiting time but

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increases

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the

lubrary

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library

users. Thank you for your time and hoping to consider my ideas. Yours Sincerely, Pramod

Darshita@8612Tue Oct 29 2024

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greeting and closing

Ensure the letter begins with a suitable greeting and ends with a polite closing. Your use of these elements is quite effective.

single idea per paragraph

Each paragraph should focus on a single idea. Consider separating the suggestion about internet speed and computer availability into two distinct paragraphs for clearer focus.

logical structure

Maintain a logical flow of ideas throughout the letter. Overall, your letter is structured logically, though separating the points could enhance clarity.

complete response

Your response effectively addresses all elements of the task, providing a complete and thoughtful response.

suitable writing tone

The tone of the letter is respectful and appropriate for addressing the library staff.

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2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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