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Some say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and age together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Music
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 is an art
that is
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 ever present in our society. It is agreed that it unites people from various c
ulture
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cultural
and age groups. Analysing the bonding effects of
music
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 on different ages, as well as its effect on uniting people from different cultures will show
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.
Firstly
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, individuals from all age groups identify with their local
music
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, especially a
music
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 in the native language.
For instance
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, I can remember when I attended a friend's wedding ceremony early
last
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 year, where all children and adults at the venue held hands to form a large circle while dancing to a song being played by the DJ.
This
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 shows the bonding effects
music
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 has on different age groups.
This
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 brings me to my
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 point, which is the ability of
music
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 to unite people from various cultures around the globe. Some artists, like Beyoncé and Rihanna, are recognised worldwide, and the
music
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 they produce is aired on several radio stations in different countries. Commuters in a public transport from different cultural backgrounds can sing the chorus along with the artist, while the song is being played on the car stereo.
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, when these musicians hold live concerts, people from different parts of w
orld
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the world
attend
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, providing an avenue for them to make new friends. They ignore the cultural diversity and unite as one, because of the
music
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 being played. These would not have been possible, if not for
music
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. In conclusion, it is obvious that
music
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 d
efinitely is
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has definitely been
a good way to unite people of varying cultures and ages. It is recommended that the government and individual support artists in o
ther
(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed
order
to ensure a sustainable growth of the
music
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 industry.
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