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Smacking is the best form of discipline. Do you agree or disagree

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Introduction
Parents tend to use multiple ways in order to control their
child
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behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. Many people seem to believe that the best way to make children obedient is by beating.
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 moderate punishment might be justified,
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, I believe that frequent spanking is entirely unacceptable, and
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Body paragraph 1
Starting with what parents fear is their
child
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 getting spoiled. Corporal punishment exactly does that as children become stubborn and develop ways to
evade
stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoid
 punishments. Though it might yield temporary benefit,
smacking
embroidery consisting of ornamental needlework on a garment that is made by gathering the cloth tightly in stitches
smocking
 makes
child
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 immune to it in the long run.
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, due to the fear of a penalty, a
child
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 may develop a bad habit like telling lies, and
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 will stick with him forever.
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,
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 of shaping his character, parents ruin it by barbaric acts.
Body paragraph 2
Frequently hitting affects the overall well-being of children. He might develop psychological disorders like depression and
alexithymia
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 as he loses confidence in himself. Many psychologists now approve the fact that an adult's contempt and misanthropic
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 can be partly attributed to beating at the hands of his parents during childhood. Occasionally hitting children affects them physically:
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, a hairline fracture or lacerated wound that go
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 and lead to a disability.
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, punishing transmits vertically through generations, and
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, the victim may become an abuser in the future. Had there been less beating by parents in the past, children would have been treated well.
Conclusion
To conclude, parents hit children in order to make them organized. The downsides of
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 are multi-folds: making them immune, developing bad habits, causing mental and bodily injuries.
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,
i
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I
 opine that parents should treat their children with compassion so that the trend of hitting comes to an end.

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