WRITING TASK 1 Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear neighbours.
 
 I am deeply sorry for disturbing you
by
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the music I was playing yesterday
at
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the evening. I can imagine how annoying it was for you. 
 As you probably noticed yesterday I was hosting my
borther
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brother
and his kids , he was going
to
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business
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trip so I had to take care of my nephews while he is away. They are lovely creatures, but they can’t sleep without
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a story
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story
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stories
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. So I played stories on my tv while they were laying in their beds.

Unfortunately
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I have only one TV and it is in the living room, so I had to play it loud enough for them to hear it. They were overwhelmed because it was the
first
time ever that they had to stay with me overnight,
that is
why it took quite some time for
them
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their
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sleep
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. I am sorry. I promise
this
will never happen again as I already order wireless speakers that I can connect to my phone and play music/stories on it. I will use it
next
time. your, neighbour.

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