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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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for
 relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
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usage
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, some people think, every
day
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awareness
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, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
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popularity
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supplement
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classroom
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,
this
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pace
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 and
convenience
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. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
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usage
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have an effect upon
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 negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
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for
 relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
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 monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
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 by children.
However
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, some people think, every
day
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use
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 of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
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age
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age
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 10 can
benefit
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usage
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supervision
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age
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 groups among children and its consequences.
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 to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
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addiction
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, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
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time
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, a
study
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department
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 of
psychology
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 on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
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 for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
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exposure
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lack
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 of
awareness
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, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
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 electronics, but
this
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situation
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. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
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exposure
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form
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 of online tutorials and
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 programming. Obviously,
this
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supervision
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the supervision
 of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
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 as a
supplement
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classroom
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education
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,
this
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pace
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 and
convenience
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. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
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usage
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for
 relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
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 monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
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 by children.
However
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, some people think, every
day
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use
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 of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
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 may negatively affect children under the
age
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age
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benefit
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usage
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supervision
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.
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usage
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, among different
age
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 groups among children and its consequences.
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daily
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addiction
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, due to
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, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
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 it, while eating or during their free
time
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.
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example
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, a
study
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Cornwell
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department
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 of
psychology
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 on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
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 for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
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exposure
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lack
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awareness
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, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
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 electronics, but
this
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situation
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. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
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exposure
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form
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 of online tutorials and
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this
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supervision
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the supervision
 of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
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 as a
supplement
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 to the
classroom
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education
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,
this
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 is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
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 and
convenience
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. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
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 their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
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such
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 as computers can
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have an effect upon
affect
 negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages too relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
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 monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
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 by children.
However
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, some people think, every
day
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use
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usage
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age
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 relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
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usage
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psychology
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 on 300 subjects, indicated
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lack
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awareness
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this
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situation
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form
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 of online tutorials and
computer
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 of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
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supplement
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 to the
classroom
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,
this
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pace
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 and
convenience
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. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
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usage
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for
 relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
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 monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
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 by children.
However
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, some people think, every
day
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use
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 of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
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age
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psychology
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 on 300 subjects, indicated
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 for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
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exposure
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lack
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awareness
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this
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situation
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form
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popularity
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supplement
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 to the
classroom
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education
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,
this
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pace
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 and
convenience
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. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
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 their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
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 as computers can
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effect
have an effect upon
affect
 negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
 relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
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 monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
Use synonyms
 by children.
However
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, some people think, every
day
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use
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 of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
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age
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age
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benefit
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 to computers for kids under 11 on
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addiction
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use
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time
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study
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department
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 of
psychology
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 on 300 subjects, indicated
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lack
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day
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situation
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form
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supplement
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classroom
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pace
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parent
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 monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
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 by children.
However
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day
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use
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Screen time
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Physical inactivity
  • Cognitive development
  • Internet addiction
  • Cyberbullying
  • Inappropriate content
  • Digital literacy
  • Virtual learning environments
  • Parental controls
  • Moderation
  • Online safety
  • Tech-savvy
  • E-learning
  • Information technology
  • Eye strain
  • Social skills
  • Multitasking
  • Interactive education
  • Health repercussions
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