Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Effect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
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for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.
online
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Online
tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervision
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the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
by children.
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usage
under
supervision
.
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
.
For
example
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervisionn
Suggestion
the supervision
supervision
supervisions
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
by children.
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usage
under
supervision
.
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
.
For
example
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervision
Suggestion
the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effectt
have an effect upon
affect
affected
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
by children.
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usage
under
supervision
.
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
.
For
example
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervision
Suggestion
the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages too relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
by children.
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usage
under
supervision
.
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
. For
examplee
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
examples
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervision
Suggestion
the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
by children.
Howeverr
Suggestion
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usage
under
supervision
.
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
.
For
example
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervision
Suggestion
the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
by children.
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usage
under
supervision
.
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreoverr
in addition
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
.
For
example
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervision
Suggestion
the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
by children.
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usage
under
supervision
.
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
.
For
example
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervision
Suggestion
the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
suchh
to so extreme a degree
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
by children.
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usage
under
supervision
.
Thiss
Suggestion
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
.
For
example
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervision
Suggestion
the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
by children.
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usage
under
supervision
.
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
.
For
example
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
thiss
denotes a person or thing
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervision
Suggestion
the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
by children.
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usage
under
supervision
.
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
.
For
example
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
thiss
denotes a person or thing
this
needs to happen under
supervision
Suggestion
the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
by children.
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usage
under
supervision
.
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
.
For
example
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervision
Suggestion
the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
thiss
denotes a person or thing
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usagee
the act of using
usage
by children.
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usage
under
supervision
.
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
.
For
example
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervision
Suggestion
the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
by children.
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usagee
the act of using
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usage
under
supervision
.
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
.
For
example
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervision
Suggestion
the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
by children.
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usagee
the act of using
usage
under
supervision
.
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
.
For
example
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervision
Suggestion
the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages
to
Suggestion
for
relatively elder kids due to resourceful applications,
parent
monitoring is a must for leveraging its full potential.The applications of computers are increasing rapidly, and so is its
usage
by children.
However
, some people think, every
day
use
of computers may actually lead to negative effects rather than positive. I consider, daily
usage
may negatively affect children under the
age
of 11, but children above
age
10 can
benefit
from daily
usage
under
supervision
.
This
essay
will discuss the effects of its
usagee
the act of using
usage
, among different
age
groups among children and its consequences.
Exposure
to computers for kids under 11 on
daily
Suggestion
a daily basis
basis
may lead to
addiction
, due to
computer
games and online media.
Moreover
, they may insist parents to allow them to
use
it, while eating or during their free
time
.
For
example
, a
study
by
Cornwell
University,
department
of
psychology
on 300 subjects, indicated
addiction
for 80% of them, and strongly indicated to avoid increased
exposure
to computers. Due to
lack
of
awareness
, some parents encourage their kids to be engaged with modern
day
electronics, but
this
will exacerbate the
situation
. In contrary, children of 11 years or older, may actually
benefit
from regular
exposure
to computers in the
form
of online tutorials and
computer
programming. Obviously,
this
needs to happen under
supervision
Suggestion
the supervision
of the parents. Online tutorials are gaining
popularity
as a
supplement
to the
classroom
education
,
this
is particularly helpful with slow learning kids, as they can learn at their own
pace
and
convenience
. Training the young minds with programming languages will help them to
shape
their careers in relevant fields. To conclude, the daily
usage
of modern electronics
such
as computers can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
negatively for younger children compare to 11 years old older ones. While there are clear advantages to
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Screen time
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Physical inactivity
  • Cognitive development
  • Internet addiction
  • Cyberbullying
  • Inappropriate content
  • Digital literacy
  • Virtual learning environments
  • Parental controls
  • Moderation
  • Online safety
  • Tech-savvy
  • E-learning
  • Information technology
  • Eye strain
  • Social skills
  • Multitasking
  • Interactive education
  • Health repercussions
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