In the future, it may be scientifically possible for people to live for 150 years. This could be good news for individuals but it may have negative consequences for our world as a whole. What are the benefits and risks of people living to 150?

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Some scientists have predicted the possibility of people living for longer years.

Although

this

could be soothing to hear, but it may have a serious effect on the

society

at large, while

this

innovation will allow people to spend more quality time with their families and

also

achieve more with their careers, we shouldn't fail to recognise the bad impact it would have on the

society

. Certainly, there are some advantages in people living longer than usual.

Firstly

, people could have more pleasure living the life they envisage and spend more valuable time with their loved ones

such

as, trying to live a different lifestyle.

Furthermore

, people could contribute more to their community development if they have a longer lifespan.

For example

, there is an adage that says "the more we live the more we learn" people could discover a permanent cure to a killer disease like AIDS and Cancer.

Nonetheless

, allowing people to live for 150 years could pose a greater challenge. People might be unhealthy in their later years because part of their body organs will be weak and might not function properly.

For instance

, old age comes with different kinds of diseases

such

as diabetes, kidney failure and so on.

Also

, an increase in the older population may put pressure on the social welfare system

such

as, wasting

society

's resources on the elderly

instead

of concentrating on the younger ones. In conclusion, the beneficial aspect of allowing people to live for long cannot be compared to the damage it will cause to people's health and the

society

at large.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

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7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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