The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graph illustrates information about the
share
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price
of Coca-Cola, between 1996 and 2001 and the chart shows data about the Use synonyms
sales
of Use synonyms
the
soft drink in five continents in the Correct article usage
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year
2000.
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Overall
, In the Linking Words
year
2000, North America contributed to the highest number of Coca-Cola Use synonyms
sales
. Middle-East and Africa are the places where the Use synonyms
sales
are minimum. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, there was an upward trend in the Linking Words
share
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price
of Use synonyms
the
soft drink during the initial period, followed by a decline and fluctuations in the end.
In the Correct article usage
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year
2000, when Use synonyms
sales
of Coca-Cola are minimum, Use synonyms
North-America
contributed to the highest percentage with 30.4% of global consumption. It was followed by Latin America and Europe with 25.7% and 20.5% respectively. Consumption of Correct your spelling
North America
the
soft drink is quite better in Asia compared to Africa and Correct article usage
apply
Middle-East
with 16.4%. Correct your spelling
Middle East
Finally
, with only 7% of global usage Africa and Linking Words
Middle-East
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Middle East
stands
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stand
last
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the
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sales
.
Regarding the Use synonyms
share
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price
of the company, it started Use synonyms
around
40$ in Change preposition
at around
the
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year
1996, Use synonyms
after
that the Correct word choice
and after
price
increased rapidly till Use synonyms
mid 1997
, reaching a value of just under 70. At Add a hyphen
mid-1997
this
point, the Linking Words
share
declined significantly, reaching approximately 60$. Use synonyms
Following
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this
, it Linking Words
went-up
considerably to a value of around 80$ in 1998, which is the peak value of the Correct your spelling
went up
share
in the given period. Use synonyms
Next
, the Linking Words
share
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price
declined steadily to under 50$ by 2000. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
share
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price
fluctuated and reached 55$ by the end of the period.Use synonyms
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