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AFTER THE ENOVATION IN THE TECHNOLOGY, PEOPLE ARE ABLE TO GET ALL KID OF INFORMATION THROUGH IT

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AS, WATCHING NEW A LIVE ON MOBIEL DEVISE.

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ESSAY WILL DISCUSS HOW IT IS UP 70 CONCURE DUE TO SOME BENEFITS AND REST OF IT OPPOSE BECAUSE OF DRAWBACKS WITH RELEVANT SUPPORTING DETAILS AND EXAMPLES. TO START WITH,

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OF ALL, STUDENT IS BENEFITED A LOT WITH TECHNOLOGY. TO ELABORATE, WHATEVER INFORMATION THEY ARE NOT FIND IN THE BOOKS OR LIBRARY, THEY CAN GOOGLE IT THROUGH

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. FOR AM INSTANCE, I AM DOING RESEARCH AND SOMEO INFORMATION I AM NOT GETING FROM THE BOOKS BUT WITH AN ASSET OF

INTERNET

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I CAN ENROLL MY SELF FOR THAT PARTICULAR TOPIC ON THE WEBSITE IN THE WHOLE GLOBE AND DO

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RESEARCH.

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OF ALL, TROUGH

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SOME PEOPLE CAN DO PREDICTION ABOUT WEATHER AND USE IT FOR THEIR FARMING PURPOSE

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AS FARMERS. TO ILLUSTRATE, DUE TO WIRELESS

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, OW FARMERS CAN CHECK THE DROUGHT AND DO THEIR CROPING ACCORDING TO THAT.FOR AN EXAMPPLE, MY FATHER WHO IS A FARMER SINCE HE RETIRED FROM GOVERNMENT SCHOLL USING WEATHER FORCAST TO SEE WHICH CROP IS SUITABLE FOR THE COMING SEASON, WHEN IT WILL RAIN ANDHOW MUCH ETC.

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, NOT ALWAYS, THAT PREDICTION ARE ACCURATE BIT STILL AT SOME POINT IT IS USEFUL SPECIALLY FOR FARMERS.

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, MORE

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DOES MAKE A PERSON IN TROUBLE WITH SOME ERRORS LIKE HUMAN ERROS, OR TECHNICAL FAULT. TO EXPLAN IN THE DETAIL, SOMETIME PEOPLE MAKE SOM APPLICATIONTHROUGH IT WILL BE EASY TO DO FRAUD

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AS, VIRUS, OR BUGS. FOR EN INSTANCE, ONE OF MY FRIEND HAD FACED

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SITUATION, WHEN SHE WAS IN THE CLASS 9TH.ONE PERSON WHO WAS STRABGER SHE MADE HIM HER FRIEND AND GONE TO REATIONSHIP. AFTER SOME TIME HIS BOYFRIEND HAD MADE HER PORN VIDEO AND PUCLISHED ON THE

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JUST BECAUSE OF SOME MONEY.

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A DANGER WHEN NOT USED WTIH PRECAUTION. TO SUM UP,

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TRUE THAT IT HAS MANY BENETITS, INCREASED USAGE OF THAT MADE HUMAN LIFE EASY AND FAST BUT SHOULD BE USED WITH CARE. TO TAKLE

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THERE SHOULD BE SOME MORE PRIVACY PROTECTION REQUIRE.

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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?

Your opinion

There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Public celebrations( such as national days, festivals, etc) are held in most countries. Theses are often quite expensive and some people say that governments should spend money on more useful things Do you agree or disagree?

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