Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of your society?

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It has been many years since
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was
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introduced to people and people today still have mixed views on whether it has a positive or a negative influence on the society. Many people believe that
television
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damages
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. It promotes the stronger cultures of countries
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as Britain and North America and weakens the cultures of less wealthy countries.
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is because the stronger, wealthier countries are able to assert their own
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by producing more programs that are shown widely around the world. These
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programs, then
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influence people, particularly young people, in the countries where they are shown.
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, because
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networks need to attract large audiences to secure their financial survival, they must produce programs which are interesting to a broad range of people. In many countries,
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range is very broad because we are a multicultural society and people of all ages like to watch
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. To interest all these different people, most
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programs are short in length, full of action and excitement, do not require much intelligence or knowledge to understand, and follow universal themes common to all cultures,
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as love and crime.
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programs which concentrate on or develop themes pertinent to one particular
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are not so successful because they interest a smaller audience.
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, we
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acknowledge that much
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does have some positive effects on the cultures within a society as well. People who do not live within their own
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can, in a limited way, access it through the multicultural station on the
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.
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, Aboriginal children who have grown up in white families, or migrants and international students living in a foreign country, can watch programs from their own
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on the
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. In conclusion, I hold the view that
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promotes and strengthens those cultures that are wealthy and influential while it weakens the cultures that are already in a weakened position.
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